All Comments on 'April Fool's Prank'

Not actually an incest story at all but not bad.

I know this is for the competition but a part 2 would be wild

Agree with Macca and Yaboi, both.

Change the category and write part 2.

"Her pussy, freshly shaven, smelt amazing..."

Uh, the words "pussy" and "smelt" really don't belong in the same sentence. The word you're looking for is "smelled"

Not a bad start, but very hard to follow.

Tha k goodness the category is incest AND TABOO ! I read the title, why don't others read it too?

this was stupid

Great that the category includes Taboo .

lost me at shaved pussy. So sad.

Proofread. Proofread, and get someone else to proofread for you. Hot concept though. Keep trying.

Re earlier comment - 'smelt' is the traditional past participle of 'smell' and is correct here. 'Smelled' also acceptable.

stacey got what she deserved

that was a funny little story. wouldn't mind a part two or even more.