All Comments on 'Aquata Cove Ch. 96'

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Feare909Feare909almost 7 years agoAuthor
Fuck, so many mistakes!

I must of wrote Chloe's scene when I was tired, I see mistakes all over! I need to repost this, sorry readers for all the errors.

sm1982sm1982almost 7 years ago
I love New Adam and Merrick Time Together..

Even though their new relationship is a result of Adam almost losing his life, he comes off so sweet and innocent in how he tells Merrick how he truly feels without holding back. And Merrick gets to fall in love all over again. I am Team Merrick when it comes to how he handled Adam's main attacker..the man showed Adam zero mercy and is walking around freely..well, until Merrick served him his own version of justice. Looking forward to the interrogation Adam is about to give Merrick over those photos!

@Feare909 don't be so hard on yourself on your criticism of a part of this chapter, it didn't affect my enjoyment (:

DarkCynder64DarkCynder64almost 7 years ago
Huh oh!

...🎵 looks like Adam has soomme exxxxplaaaiiinning to do🎵

Feare909Feare909almost 7 years agoAuthor
Re: Huh oh!

Hehehehe, you mean Merrick?

[Plays 'I Love Lucy' theme antic tunes]

DarkCynder64DarkCynder64almost 7 years ago
RE: Re: Huh oh!

.... .... .... *blushes feircly* yes, I meant Merrick...

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