All Comments on 'Arcade Pt. 03'

Loved the third chapter! Eroticism at its best! Keep the story cuming!

As I said earlier, if this is even a little bit based on truth I envy you your experience. This description puts my first threesome to shame. I can't wait to read more. Thank you for taking the time to get it written.

My first post to you was anonymous, your story is what caused me to register. Again thanks for your story.

For the incestual frissante, a half brother is hotter than a step brother - but to be fair it's a close run thing. Exceptionally hot to be fucked by brothers whatever the relationship. Keep it going

Thank you for your comment good sir, I'm very humbled to hear you joined as a member because of my story.

This story did start off as a retelling of my personal experience, but changed to fiction after the first chapter. I have experienced a threesome or three, but they were more the result of drunken nights and completely accidental circumstances which weren't nearly as exciting as in the story.

The next chapter goes a little dark, and I'm not sure why the story-line developed this way, but it's what came out so I tried to flow with it. I hope it's enjoyable and doesn't kill the story.

Which name is correct? Great tale nonetheless. Loved it. cp

I know everyone is a critic... good lord, read some of the comments on mine.

I liked this one, it was a great follow-on to your earlier tales. It still had my cock hard throughout! Keep writing! It's all great when we get to a happy ending together.

Well written, I thoroughly enjoyed it. A minor glitch with the name, but looking forward to more from you.