All Comments on 'Arcana's Path Ch. 02'

So good! You are building another enchanting world for us. Thank you.

Yes, I'm enjoying this series. 5/5

Amazing work as always :)

Great continuation - really looking forward to reading more.

Many thanks for sharing with us all....

Loving this!!! Violet and Rin are soo cute. Kitty is hard to get a read on, but liking the drama with Arcana's mom.

Love these stories. Great work.

God, I think I have a new favorite story from you! I *cannot* wait for the next chapter!

I really like Arcana and Kitty and there budding relationship. I think you might be taking it this way but I hope you make Kitty as powerful as Arcana someway. You've hinted at it and it would be so cool. Arcana just seems like she would want someone in her life that was on a equal footing as herself and someone who obviously doesn't care how powerful her mother is. Great work as usual.

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Cheers

Unless those two jokers are air force, because the Air Force is...special...(and based on their conduct...they could be), you don't call a freaking corporal "sir"! Period! NCO's work for a living, damn it! Call your sergeant "sir" sometime, I dare you.

You would think two damaged individuals who basically have problems in common would figure things out pretty quick but they tend to both be stuck in their own heads. I did like how Kitty kicked that bitch of a mother out of the Jeep and then laid into her. That’s the great thing about not caring whether you live or die, threats mean nothing and you can live as dangerously as you like.

@anubelore Dragons. Air Force. And agreed, "special" is the right word for it!

What is with the they/them pronouns for Kitty? It's really distracting. That and her oddly affected speech (pirate meets anime delinquent?) Story earns you 4/5 so far, but the writing doesn't live up to the standard you set with Toofy.

The anonymous asshole bitching about pronouns can go eat a vaguely-gendered dick.

As someone who is sick, but not to that degree... I get the nosebleeds and treating them as though they shouldn't matter. Been there; I usually use TP since it doesn't have lotion. I wish I could send Kitty a hug, but it would just piss her off anyways.