All Comments on 'Archer's Lane Case 01 Ch. 02'

Your artistry takes us wholly inside of likable Eliza at the threshold of such a lovely tsunami of discoveries of pleasures. That threshold is such an exquisite place. Beautiful work!

Pick a category and keep this story there or it will be lost to some. I don't always go looking in certain categories and may have missed this since I don't look here ever. Great so far, keep up the good work.

Hallo Kat P!

Not a long story this time, but makes up for it by being really hot and very sexy,,, yes! .... As much as I hate agreeing with anyone, especially a male...it would be nice if you picked a more popular category,,, say like "Lesbian Sex". 😍

Thank-you, a very enjoyable story, 5-Stars and almost An Orgasm!

Your kinky dyke friend,

Gay Kat..

Next you need to develop these two characters a little more and add others.

The plot needs to run seperate from the sex ie 60%"detective" plot and 40% Esex scenes

djb