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FieroGT1988 over 4 years ago

Just a question about the immersion

How did Charlie get into the story line. I thought Sierra was the one who was filling in for Giselle . It seems as if you cut and pasted the event from the earlier playing of it (I am sure to keep it the same throughout the story line) but failed to Wordsmith the name inside? That being said still 5s as usual

SanityCheck over 4 years agoAuthor

That's a good question...

I'm not sure how, or when, Charlie ended up in the immersion. In my original draft, it's Sierra.

Thank you for point this out.

I'm revising the text.

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