All Comments on 'Arianna Ch. 01'

Your analogies and phrasing is perfect, very creative wordmaster. Just a bit weak in the explanation of what happened that afternoon, but I suppose mystery if events leaves much to the imagination. Having seven showcats, you captured being owned purrfectly.

I enjoyed this story and am looking forward to more.

I enjoyed this story overall. It was a quick, fun read. However, two things jumped out at me. <br><br>

The protagonist would not have been allowed to practice law in Colorado without passing the Colorado bar. The only exception is Colorado's single client counsel rule, which allows out-of-state lawyers to practice law in-state for <b>single clients</b> (as in, attorney has one client with a case in CO, and receives special permission to act as attorney for that client, but not to practice law generally) without having to take and pass the Colorado bar examination. <br><br>

The second is about milk and cats. A regular diet of milk is actually not good for cats, and many get diarrhea if they drink too much milk. <br><br>

Yeah, I know -- picky, picky. But attention to detail is what separates a good story from a great one.

And that's saying something. I look forward to reading the next chapter, and then the one after that, and the one after that, and...

I agree this is a Lighthearted and Fun story, and I have to give you the points you introduced....... But I'll bet ya never noticed the author had a loveable little kitty cat turn into a humanoid type person/ sex machine. Now I've owed a lot of the little critters and I ain't had one of them do that.

Just the little details don't ya know.

SF so far so good keep it up and I for one will read the next chapter. Keep up the good work.

Writingdragon

i liked it, can't wait for the next chapter!

Literotica = "Literate" + "Erotica." IMHO, ScriptorFidelis scores highly on both counts.

"Arianna" is a light, refreshing sexual romp between two... er... people who obviously love one another, written by someone who's grasp of written English is clearly far above average, and is an excellent example of a stand-alone short story. (In fact, I'd be very cautious about trying to continue the story. Always leave 'em wanting more!)

Theodore Sturgeon said that "90% of everything is crud." This story falls squarely into the *other* 10%. Keep up the good work.

it was a refreshingly new story. Please write more. It was too short for me!

That was great! That was one of the best nonhuman stories I've seen in awhile. I look forward to reading the next chapter.

Dude, this was awesome! I cannot wait for Ch. 2

It was fun and playful; just what I was looking for. I'm really looking forward to the sequel. :D

Awesome, hope to read the next chapter soon.

Amazing story, but WHERE'S THE NEXT CHAPTER??

I am a cat lover and this story was adorable. Next chapter please.

Tell me your working on a 2nd chapter,lol.

That was beautiful. I have never read a non-human story here, but I am a cat lover so I decided to check this one out and I was glad I did. Would love to see another chapter maybe Ari telling him about where she came from.

A good start, and while it works as a stand-alone I'm hoping you can find the time to continue this.

I'm almost lost for words. The only thing that I can say is that I want more

Please continue this Story, it has potential

please write more!

add more you sonofabitch

Wow that was great, your an amazing writer man/woman.

This was a great start! Please continue this, for the "Change" needs to be explained along with the new couple!

-Nisr

Loved it, you sir are a true genius, please write more!

I can't help but feel that this will never be finished though, unfortunately. It would have been interesting to see this continue

this is an awesome story. i have read something slightly similar though it was a hentai. please write more, dont be selfish :P

That was SO hot! Please continue. Please!

More Please!! this is probably 1 of the best i have found on literotica !!! just must make more!!!

You should continue writing literotica needs the works of authors such as yourself.

XIII

Furry=/=catgirl

I have to admit that was a cute story. I could imagine a sci-fi'ish day when some animals could become human-animals hybrids, like Weres. It was a really lovely.

TiM

Honestly, this was... Well, I don't have the words... The sex scene could have done with being lengthened but in honesty, I loved it. ^_^ MORE PLEASE!

Really worth reading :-)

second part please

Im telling everyone this story is only one chapter. He is not going to do more. So do give up on this story. Thats what Im going to do because its been 7 years since the last update.

Please write more. I absolutely loved this.

This many years after and no subsequent submittal, it seems Ch. 01 is the only.

Sad for what could have been.

I WANT MORE! I have waited years for a sequel and I still am.

You see the hint in the title of this comment right? This was a great little story, but we need more!

I am still waiting for more. I understand that you have a life outside of this but I loved this so much. Please give us more.

Short and sweet, I loved it. Would have liked additional chapters, though.

""Um…uh… yeah." This is why I am not a trial lawyer."

And funny, too!

13 years for chapter 2... It better be one hum dinger of a story...

Cats are actually lactose intolerant.

really unfortunate that the fun interesting, promising for more stories never get continued...or have a finish

That was very sweet and very funny

[06.08.22]

Verrry Kawaii!

11/10!!!!!

Very nice story, I hope a sequel occurs one day… though sadly, probally not ):

amazing but 1 star because you quit the story