All Comments on 'Ariel's Slutty Descent - Day 01'

It could have been longer with more action but it was still a great start. I hope you write many sequels

Great! Hope there's a part 2 soon.

One paragraph of confusion, otherwise a good revenge non-con degradation set-up. Mean the scene when Jermaine is first greeted by his aunt. Maybe a sentence or so was deleted during editing? "She" switched identity from Ariel to Vivien. Anyway its a minor issue, chapter was fun to read over-all.

Hope there will be many more chapters than 10 to come (the 01 number makes sense if there are at least 11 chapters ;-) How will Jason react to his daughters transformation? One minor point of plot concern is the husband being a dentist - normally supposed to be health conscious and opposed to drugs. An interesting plot idea is the Jason appreciating his slutwife Vivian in bedroom. So maybe he might not too strongly oppose his daughter Ariel behaving like one.

Total fucking garbage -10 stars please stop writing

Love the description of him roughly using her