All Comments on 'Arise, A Knight Ch. 03'

Hey u do like the concept of ur story, and I get that English is not ur first language but if it were possible I would recommend you to make use of the editor service of lit. There were quite a few minor mistakes like instead of at it u wrote at tit, and some of the sentences can be written in a different way for better clarity.

Anyway even of u don't make use of editor I'm gonna continue reading. Best of luck