All Comments on 'Aristippus - Jenny's Story'

A wonderful tale, nicely told.

Very nice tale of how Jenny matured, found her calling, and developed her escort business. She seemed like a very sweet girl and having fallen for a ballerina once upon a time (however briefly), I could picture her quite well from the description and see the attraction and how her patrons could be interested. I’ll send a PM with a few more comments.

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Oops, forgot to include this note in my review:

The most important feature of the story is its believability. Not everyone is a straight A student and not everyone succeeds at whatever they try. In Jenny's case, she was good but not great and eventually looked for something that interested her that was also within her capability. When she started getting involved in her sidelines, it was really understandable how she could lower barriers and step across to the next level to better herself and her situation. Great job showing that.