All Comments on 'Arizona Heat Pt. 02b'

I thought Jenny owned the Chevy Nova, not Kate? Since this chapter is written from Kate's POV, it's confusing.

I was really unprepared for the "Part B" stories, but found that even though it was the same story, point of view still made it fresh.

I look forward to reading parts 3, 4 and 5 (A and B).

I continue to be enthraled by your writing style. The story is written so well from two different points of view. Often, a reader might feel a let down when reading the second version of a story. But, not with your writing. The conversations flow so naturally and the detail of the story varies just enough to keep the reader hooked. You have quickly become one of my favorite writers on Literotica. I do hope you continue to share this exceptional talent.

I loved the story. Too bad it was on Nifty Archives as well.