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by pleasant_nightmares

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JoanneWrightJoanneWrightover 8 years ago
Short and sweet

An exciting encounter that I long for

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
biased

always have to be at men's expense hunh?

wibitriwibitriover 8 years ago
A good BEGINING

Want more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Nice!

Fun & sexy little short story. Keep up the good work!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Let's hope

A bit short, perhaps, but nevertheless a tale to be enjoyed. If these were real people, I'd say let's hope it works out for them (and bump up Jeremy's credit card bill to the limit before he cottons on!).

germanchocolate4ugermanchocolate4uover 8 years ago

Short & Sweet - more please

visioneervisioneerover 8 years ago

I enjoyed your story. You imagine interesting characters and convincingly portray their emotions. Great job building the sexual tension and the sex was wonderfully written - quietly intense without being over the top. Nice work.

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