All Comments on 'Arizona'

I enjoyed your story. You imagine interesting characters and convincingly portray their emotions. Great job building the sexual tension and the sex was wonderfully written - quietly intense without being over the top. Nice work.

Short & Sweet - more please

A bit short, perhaps, but nevertheless a tale to be enjoyed. If these were real people, I'd say let's hope it works out for them (and bump up Jeremy's credit card bill to the limit before he cottons on!).

Fun & sexy little short story. Keep up the good work!

Want more!

always have to be at men's expense hunh?

An exciting encounter that I long for