All Comments on 'Armored Love Ch. 04'

I really like this story, and was glad to see more, but I think this chapter may have been a bit rushed. It's great to see more back story on Bianca (and will be for Tony, too, when it's time). The problems are really more grammatical, I think. In the 3d and 4th paragraphs, you move to present tense, which is a little jarring. It really takes you out of the story, b/c you switch from Bianca's POV to a removed person, which you hadn't done before. I think with just a few word changes, you could make this flow a little better. But keep going, I really want to see more!

did you really just stop right there? Not cool at all miss. I'll expect and update and soon, darn cliffy's.

I've read all 4 chapters for this story and its good but the pacing of the story is a little to fast, all these milestone events in the characters life should have more buildup. which makes each chapter is way to short but over all still a good story but not as good as it could be.

i realy like this story but your taking to long with the chapters and they are to short.

I don't want to beg, but I will if I have to. Please update this story soon!

Please, Please, PLEASE I need more

Where is the rest. That note said part 5 was going to be out soon and now its 4 months later almost 5