All Comments on 'Art Fair'

Well written, neither too short or overlong. Enough detail to paint the picture but not to drown the storyline.

Very erotic, thank you for sharing it!

Good job.....well scripted.

This story is my favorite in your short catalog. You described a wonderful afternoon and I found myself wishing to be in our story, the artist to your sweaty seductress. Thank you for such a well written story. I really do hope you continue to write.

Bob

This is your second story I have read today, and I loved both of them. You write well and your detail has me wanting to read more and very aroused. Thank you.

"I leaned in and kissed him on the chest, lightly biting his nipples ..." --Yes!

I would love for a woman to do that to my nipples!