All Comments on 'Art in Reality Ch. 02: Words Slip Out'

Nice story line. Good changes of pace with good descriptions of localities. A very enjoyable read despite the very occasional use of a wrong word or misspelling.

Hope there is a next chapter.

Devir Ginator

Loving it. Very well written. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Good stuff!! Loving it.

Definitely five stars.

Even though it was never completed, I very much enjoyed your first version. An excellent story that deserves to be completed....

This is a very good story, and very well written, too. I also wish there was at least one more chapter to the story. It just seems incomplete, as is.

I know real life can take over at times, and I have been gagging for more than a year to see the next episode in this series. Hope you haven't given up writing (that would be a terrible shame and a great loss to this community). It should be possible to find just a little time to continue the adventurous tale.

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Devir Ginator

Thank you for writimg this story Paul.

You have a talent for telling a story. Your characters are believable and very human. The prose flows well and your descriptions are just right, not too wordy and not too lean.

I hope you find the time to complete this story and to create new ones. I have you marked as a favorite author so I will be notified when you post a story again. I hope it is soon.

Thank you for sharing your creative talent with us.

GHreader

I’ve enjoyed it very much. Were I scoring it I would give it three stars. One just for effort and two more because it’s such a good story. It should be five stars, without a doubt. But it’s been damn near three years with no movement on the story so I would have to knock off two stars. I really wish the author would finish this story because it deserves it. And so do we readers.