by Paul_Clowell
I’ve enjoyed it very much. Were I scoring it I would give it three stars. One just for effort and two more because it’s such a good story. It should be five stars, without a doubt. But it’s been damn near three years with no movement on the story so I would have to knock off two stars. I really wish the author would finish this story because it deserves it. And so do we readers.
Thank you for writimg this story Paul.
You have a talent for telling a story. Your characters are believable and very human. The prose flows well and your descriptions are just right, not too wordy and not too lean.
I hope you find the time to complete this story and to create new ones. I have you marked as a favorite author so I will be notified when you post a story again. I hope it is soon.
Thank you for sharing your creative talent with us.
GHreader
I know real life can take over at times, and I have been gagging for more than a year to see the next episode in this series. Hope you haven't given up writing (that would be a terrible shame and a great loss to this community). It should be possible to find just a little time to continue the adventurous tale.
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Devir Ginator
This is a very good story, and very well written, too. I also wish there was at least one more chapter to the story. It just seems incomplete, as is.
Even though it was never completed, I very much enjoyed your first version. An excellent story that deserves to be completed....
Loving it. Very well written. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Nice story line. Good changes of pace with good descriptions of localities. A very enjoyable read despite the very occasional use of a wrong word or misspelling.
Hope there is a next chapter.
Devir Ginator