All Comments on 'Art Model Ch. 05'

I'd rate the entire story a 5. The buildup to the final scene was excellent.

Even though the storyline was a very 'cute meet', I felt a bit disappointed in shallowness of the character interactions. This could have been a great story, but the plethora of typos was a major distraction. Get a good editor. You can still develop into a first class writer, you just need to practice your craft and get all the help you can dig up. Everyone starts at the beginning and this is a good start for you. Best of luck and keep writing. :)

Very nice storyline, I can't wait to see future installments. I hope he doesn't blow it.

A charming story that was both hot and romantic

please write more