All Comments on 'Art, Part Two Ch. 02'

Jerry in Washington State, USA - Nice to see Chapter 2 the very next day, although you did say the chapters should appear almost daily. I enjoyed Suzanne and Art finally having real sex, or as real as they can have at Art's size. I still vote for the machine to make up for Art's accident by making a larger man than before, with a larger penis than before. That way he could be big enough in all respects for Suzanne and whether they click as a couple be the only factor on their future together. I've enjoyed your story from the first and care about both Art's and Suzanne's happiness. I do so hope for a decent happy ending, but I also realize you have to take the story where you as the writer need to.