All Comments on 'As I Want You to Be Ch. 05'

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jenorma2012jenorma2012about 5 years ago
ok

from what I read of this it was written good, but for me it was too long so I read about 4 pages and then skipped to the end, not sure I read the other 4 chapters

InPennyInPoundInPennyInPoundabout 5 years ago
So so so happy.

Was so freaking happy when I looked and saw a new story from you! Love this series since I was a silly lil butch boi once so can relate to LJ's struggle to fit in and find her own groove. Amazingly written as always and hope there is more to come.

Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Loving it

Happy to see this story continue. You have developed the characters so well. I have noticed over the years that puppies and kittens love to play together,just a thought ;)

TSreaderTSreaderabout 5 years ago
So well written!

I for one, am very grateful that you continued this story! Wonderfully done all the way through, I do hope that it continues. Thank you so much!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
I love you and this and live for it lol

Mmoooorrreee uuugghhhh ... also my gf fucking and how we met was my favorite for years and i literally just realized kn this chapter of this story that the two are conntected lol dang /).(\

stroudlestroudleabout 5 years ago
Yeah

Mia and LJ are back. I love this series, brilliant. The struggle LJ faces, trying to find her way as an unexperienced butch teen is something that can be related to, so drawing the reader in. I was held captive from the first word to the last.

Thank you

Jc

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Hmmn

Nice story but I'm guessing the original author of the 1st 4 installments isn't the same one who posted this chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Kay

Is this in the same timeline as my girlfriend how we met

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

Love your stories hope you continue this series and meeting my girlfriend. Well done

TheserialwaffleTheserialwaffleover 3 years ago

Super cute and caring and sexy and well, this time you didn’t use your fetish in webster’s words but very Well done. Superb. Thank you

moimeme68moimeme68about 2 years ago

Great series, hot sex scenes; although the story is a bit wordy.

okami1061okami1061almost 2 years ago

What story? There was no story in that pointless meandering. What a waste of words.

Unless, the point was that trying to be an 18 year old lesbian IS pointless.

Then you were spot on.

UncertainTUncertainTover 1 year ago

Reading this story is a pleasure and an education.

NoLongerAnonNoLongerAnonover 1 year ago

LJ is a very endearing character. I'd like to see her story continue until she finds a real romantic relationship.

Nicole2023Nicole2023over 1 year ago

What happens to Lj? Does ever find love?

snornsnorn3 months ago

Aw, this was very cute and sweet

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Looking for beta readers for drafts of new Arete chapters (different narrator, not Taiglox) in revision. If you've time to read and lend a critical eye, please let me know?

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