All Comments on 'As Pleases My General'

Please write more. That was one of the most beautiful stories I've read in a long time, and far above most other stories here.

Just fantastic.

I thoroughly enjoyed this story, but I feel like I'm coming in the middle. I suppose I enjoy long stories as well as short ones so if the one had set up the feud and everything else, I would have liked it just as much if not more. Great story though.

I love these fantasy stories of yours. I have read the Pack of Tales as well, but I prefer these. Now I just wonder whether this happens in the same world as the Maiens and Sietters.

Very well written. I love your writing style and think it is some of the best I have seen here on literotica.

I have just written my first ever story and would love for you to read it and let me know your thoughts and critique.

(A Tale of Two Wives 001)

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