All Comments on 'Asexual Reproduction Ch. 02'

While I found this tale to be quite interesting, it is also quite horrific.

This portion of the story reminds me of the movie, "Skyline"!

(If you've seen it, then you have an idea, to what I'm referring to -- if not... well, then... go rent/buy the DVD!)

I *was* hoping that Kelly would become "one-of-them" -- instead of what *did* happen...!

Well, that's definitely *ANOTHER WAY*, to "give head!" ;-D

After the first two parts one could still believe that there was a power around that meant nothing bad and that wanted to spread peace and sexual fulfilment, a little like in AVATAR. Now there are suddenly these slugs, and larvae drilling into peoples´ foreheads. It was intensely erotic, now it´s just plain creepy and disgusting. Why...?

The profound difference in the reader ratings between the mostly benign first chapter and the complete horror of the 2nd chapter says more about the readers than the quality of the story (which is excellently written in both chapter 1 and 2).

Chapter 2 certainly brings the horror. With a sledgehammer.

We'll done and utterly fucking creepifying. Kudos, author, kudos.

[insert enthusiastic yet utterly revolted applause here!]