All Comments on 'Ashley's Public Exposure'

You have a vivid imagination and you put it into words beautifully. Thanks for this!

I liked where the story was going, but the story-telling, grammatical, and spelling errors forced me to stop reading. Please use an editor for any stories you post in the future.

With your writing the tense jumps from past to present, the pov changed from talking about her to her talking mid sentence. I gave up reading sorry the idea may be good but the excicution was very poor

Can you make another story where Ashley gets humiliated in school?

A story following her humiliation at school and life going forward could be very enjoyable, not enough stories go this extreme and I'd like to read more like this

Thanks for all the input. I'm in the process of making another story about a slut named Jenny who loves to humiliate herself in a mall. And after that I will make a second story about Ashley's life after what happened in the first story. I am in process of getting an editor, so the stories are more enjoyable to read. Thanks!

Piss poor reading.

May I remind you that "Literotica" comes Literature + Erotica. Your awful piece of text does not contain a single thing of either of those.

Oh, maybe you thought that the part of Liter was not spelled right and it was Litter. Yes, that must be it.

One star because there are not minus stars here.

I can't believe I came to this