All Comments on 'Asian Plaything'

by hawkintherain

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jane marwoodjane marwoodover 11 years ago
good five star start.

well done.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

Hi, not a big fan of one page stories. Liked this though and would like to read more 5*

hawkintherainhawkintherainover 11 years agoAuthor

thanks for the positive feedback... this was my first attempt.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

wonderful in its detail and its realism. more, please.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Continuation

I love your story - it has a vibrancy and a sensitivity about it, and the language is exquisite!

Please continue the story. I want to know just how Preeti makes him pay for ejaculating into her leather boots. I hope to read many stories of how his wife and Preeti join forces to totally emasculate him.

My wife spanks me when I misbehave; I hope that she and a friend read your stories and are inspired by them in ways that will help them increase my submission.

Thank you!

Quakertrucker

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