by jkim
look forward to each chapter and cant wait to see them fully submit.
big a piece of shit as the hero would write it or call it a great story
sorry, gyrl does not think so. her friends have tired of the effort and emotions it takes to continue
Really enjoyed this series. Well written with some fun and nasty characters.
janet is a real honest to goodness BITCH who needs to be taught instead of ev and sophie dominent streak be DAMED
This story exemplifies the way we should all treat our women. I know I do, but I have not done any major piercings yet. I think I will start that tomorrow!
I read all the chapters of your story, and must say enjoyed each one. I was a bit disappointed that more did not follow but enjoyed what was available. A few minor errors but none distracted from the overall story. I do have one question though, do you see yourself as Ev, Sophie, or Janet? I hope you are able to reply. My email is bill1367074@yahoo.com
Up until the 1950's sickos like you would have been committed to a mental institution. But then Big Pharma and the witch docors who call themselves psychiatrists and psychologists have sold the public that they can actually help people! The profession of "physician" has been recognized for at least 5000 years. Egypt even had a "Chief Gynecologist" for the entire kingdom as far back as 2700 B.C. But the average patient did not benefit from the "theraputic encounter " with the physician until the middle of the 19th Century. The mental health professions didn't start until Sigmund Freud invented it in the late 1870's. Until the early 1960's these "doctors' were still sticking icepicks through a patient's eye socket and then fish it around to cut the connections between two parts of the patient's brain! (Google "prefrontal lobotomy" or check wiki for the other simliar "treatments" by the witch doctors of the 20th Century! Insulin shock therapy which put patients repeatedly into comas, elcectro-shock therapy which causes confusion, frequent memory loss and retrograse annesia! And the list goes on!
But these "doctors" now use all the drugs Big Pharma pushes on them, and so we let crazy people like you on the streets, when you really belong confined to a mental institution!
One star for this diseased crock of feces!
to anonymous critic. The story was posted over 10 years ago. Your facile comment has no impact 10 years on for those of us who chose to read this fiction.
Read the story hoping to find some redeeming qualities. None! Rape and assault because some dumb bitch was dumped by her boyfriend in HS and couldn’t get over it, so she orally, anally, and assuming the story continues vaginally rapes (taking her virginity) the girl who said boyfriend dated once is horrific. And the “Master” does all this knowing the history??? Even the other employees are complicit in the rape of these two women? And Nathan!?!? Oh sorry bro your gf isn’t comfortable giving you a blowjob, so instead of respecting the person you claim to love you rape her mouth in front of a group of people. Some sick fucks out there who write this, or think like the “masters” need the real punishment.