All Comments on 'Asma's Eyes Are Opened Ch. 01'

Thanks for the read

Need a second part of this soon!!

Brilliant. Looking forward to part 2

Thank you for writing this story. Not enough stories about Brown Muslim women and BBC's on here. Great to see myself represented in a story like this. Can't wait for the next chapter. Also should you require any help with future stories please let me know.

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I like the reluctance of a woman as she is seduced into perversity. This Muslim woman introduction could be really appealing.

Seems Muslim men are super controlling egotists, and having her attracted to a dominating male could be too much of the same thing she gets at home. A bigger penis to ride is just bigger and not really different enough to turn her from the huge downside of social out casting by her people. Maybe polish the male character a little and make them not so, false but stereotypical, as a misogynistic street talking thug.

Thanks for sharing.

Anon - I take your point but I think you are trading in a sterotype yourself regarding Muslim men. We all have a cultural background that we then either accentuate or ameliorate.

Tahrima - Thank you so much for your kind offer. Its quite likely that I'll be in touch!