All Comments on 'Aspiring Actress'

The idea of the story is good. However, your writing is covered with mistakes and is very poor. I suggest rewriting this page with a little more care towards clear writing and proofreading.

Yeah I hear ya. Unfortunately I just dont have the time. I am in desperate need of an editor and partnership to help me.

@lclucky this is good enough. We don't come here for a literary masterpiece and this piece is very readable.

Although good enough isnt what im going for I appreciate the feedback. Again wroting isnt my strong suit, sexual creativity is my strength. Please keep reading though im getting better at proofreading.