All Comments on 'Asshole'

I am completely blown away by this story! It's sweet, it's cute, it's laugh-out-loud funny, it's tragic, it's heart-wrenching, it's moving, it's heroic, it's passionate, it's just everything. Total knock-out!

Oook. Started as an usual jerk off session. But this story kind of hit home pretty bad. So I finished it for the joy of reading it.

Well written. One of the best I've read, actually. And I read a lot of them...

I think Rory could drop dead, if you ask me. Like I said this story just hit a bit closer to home than it should.

But I understand the relationship, I related to the characters. Which makes it a very good story.

Well done. Keep it up!!!

Thank you, thank you, thank you. With cherries on top. That was wonderful.

Another great story to add to all your other great stories. Seriously, the characters are excellent, the story progression is well thought out, and the writing is top tier. And that’s not even mentioning how hot the sex is. Keep up the good work. Please!

This story was well-written so kudos to the author’s talent. Obviously I read all 8 pages so it was compelling. But the title was dead-on. Rory is a top-shelf asshole and not in a cute, funny sort of way. He mistreated Jeremy in every aspect of their history together. He knowingly abandoned him in HS to be “cool,” he physically assaulted him for decades, he selfishly seduced him - claiming to love him - but only within very narrow constraints and within his selfish terms, he hypocritically berated him for his other lovers through the years but never publicly acknowledged him and did the same with his own beards, he publicly criticized him openly in the media, he callously stole job opportunities, he ignored him like a spoiled child for years, and even until the final paragraphs he begrudgingly came out yet still wanting Jer to remain silent. This was no love story - people in love put the other person first, make sacrifices for them, forsake anything else in favor of them. Rory - and to a lesser degree but still heinously, Jeremy - did none of these things. This was a story of self-centeredness, blind pursuit of selfish success, deep self-hatred and unforgivable behaviors, and rampant deceit and dishonesty. The sex was not hot, it was generally disrespectful, spiteful, abusive, cruel, mean-spirited and pathetic. The characters often hated themselves, each other, their other partners, and frankly life in general. It was at its core a very unsympathetic story. So much damage was done throughout by the time the secret was known - and it was not heroically admitted, it was forcefully outed by Olivia! - the coming out scene was hobbled through, limping along to a conclusion, all the while still not celebrating the fact that these “star-crossed lovers” could finally celebrate their love. To the bitter end, they were positioning it, and strategizing how their careers could benefit from the best spin of the story. I see that there was supposed to be humorous, tongue-in-cheek, wink-wink, witty banter between these two crazy kids but it was completely overshadowed by the dark hateful nature of their toxic dynamic that had clearly not led to any happiness for these two in decades. Might call it real-life, but I don’t know people who’s real lives are like this. I’d call is miserable and so very sad.

Good story. I enjoyed it.

This story was so well written it's insane. It's one of the best for sure.

This is kinda like a masterpiece.

Shew, I wanted to kick Rory's ass right to the end! Wonderful story, well written and sexy.

Great story. Loved it all.

I fucking love your work gawd i feel so lonely now that this ended

Great story! I came upon it this morning, and could not stop reading! I am not sure how Jer put up with the bullying and torture in high school! It really was a love hate scenario for both!

Rory was a very unlikable jerk the entire way! But it was obvious that he was over compensating for his true feelings! Many struggle with societies stigma when they come to terms with the fact that being gay is not acceptable to most! I was not expecting a happy ending for either until the very end!

Honestly, I read your story because it was (at the time) #1 on the Top Stories list for Gay Male stories. I did so as I way to help me learn what my stories might be lacking when the main characters are in bed. Your story and the many sex scenes it included helped me realize how important chemistry is for the couple involved. And oh boy do Jer and Rory have chemistry together! Chemistry that would, personally, exhaust me but chemistry nonetheless. It was fun to read and yes, the many sex scenes made me leak. And I love things that make me leak. What an awesome 26,212 words, I mean story! :D

Wow! Totally worth the award! Fantastic story.

Loved the story, the writing style, the plot, and the love-hate relationship the two main characters developed over the years. 13 years of waiting for someone to want to be their true selves in a world that claims they want the real and not the fake but condones and is cruel to those who are different. Happy to read that Rory loved Jeremy and their relationship enough to no longer lie about himself and the man he loved. As a straight woman who has seen or heard of friends having to hide who they sleep with because the other is in the “closet” or not ready to be themselves, my heart goes out to everyone who is scared, afraid, or unwillingly to speak and live in their truths.

I really enjoyed this. No notes.

Super cute. Loved it.

Well written. Especially on quick, intense scenes, I noticed typos and missing words. People say bad grammar turns off the reader from the plot. But in this story's case, the typo just showed the excitement of the author while writing it and this made it even more enjoyable to read. Who doesn't want to know that the author enjoyed writing it as much as we loved reading it?!

You’re an amazing writer but I absolutely HATED Rory and their whole relationship. Rory would be absolutely crucified nowadays in the media.

I hate Rory and wish Jeremy had more self-respect. Since when is hurting someone love? Rory didn't love Jeremy he loved his obsessive submission toward him. Just my opinion but your writing is great.

I enjoyed the references in the story to modern Brazilian football (soccer), especially the mention of one of Brazil's greatest players, Garrincha. Readers here may be interested in knowing that Garrincha was famous throughout Brazil for (among other things) his legendary 25cm cock. His monumental cock size and tremendous football skills notwithstanding, Garrincha had a very difficult life and died poor, likely from the effects of alcoholism. His former spouse, the supremely talented samba singer (and gay icon) Elza Soares, died just a few weeks ago, singing to the very end.

I was worried I am following to a bad end when I was in the middle of reading, Maybe between page 4 and 5. Glad that they were finally on the same page. Just reading your latest one, "want you to want me", it seems a little that the characters are similar, but I just started reading so maybe I would be surprised later. I really suggest you should warn your newest readers that most of your stories are longer than 2 pages and how you are good at turning people into emotional wrecked mess.

Great story but not my favorite by far. Just couldn't get the feels for Rory. Just too much of an asshole, but I guess that's the point.

I wish you had written a bit more of the outing by the press as it was possibly the more satisfying point to have his plans fail *finally.* Would have loved to see him fall apart and go through the stages of denial until he finally realized he had no choice in the matter. But maybe that's just me hating him again. Lol

There's a wide variety of thoughts on this, but I enjoyed it a bunch, even when I hated Rory. It was incredibly compelling and I am grateful that you shared it with us.

I like your Nerd story a lot but I don't like slutty main character here. Fucks with one, fucks with the other, do we really have to know about that? Can't you, authors, just write about 1:1 relationship but have to fucking random captains on the road and stuff?

I'm so tired of listening to slutty gay romance. Don't give a story tag gay love when it's about sluts.

I hate Rory with burning passion.

What a great story! I love it and really enjoyed the read. Thank you so much for posting :-)

Jeez, enough with the hating Rory, this is erotica - and pretty damn hot erotica, too. Loved the sex scenes, so raunchy.

Rory is a walking red flag, I was rooting for them to not get together. Loved the story, nonetheless.

I really liked the story although not as much as I liked the others I have read so far. Rory was just too unpleasant--hard to suspend my disbelief and buy that he really loved the MC and still said and did such hateful things to him year after year. It was also a little long--hard to stay engaged when Rory did hateful things over and over and the arguments dragged at times. But still much better than many of the stories on this site.