All Comments on 'Assisting Photography'

I can't wait to read chapter 2, as I enjoyed read this chapter.

That was an awesome opening ! I can't wait for part 2 :)

loved the opening chapter please continue and may be make chapter two longer

Me too, can't wait to know to what awaits both Hanny and Jenny. Thanks.

Hot but much too short...

We have here less than a single 'letter' size page of content. Unlike other reviewers I don't think it is "a very good start" and I don't think it is an "awesome opener" as other reviewers have said. I agree with Lunawolf1341 and think it is "Such a tease...

Hot but much too short..."

If you want to set a scene I suggest you make an opener a lot longer, and have more to say. There is so much good stuff on Literotica, and this half-hearted submission, expecting people to wait (days, weeks?) for the next small snippet, is asking too much of an audience or fan base. If I come back to see the next segment, it will be by accident or coincidence, which is a shame, because I think you have some writing talent. As it is, this was too little and not enough to consider bookmarking, or favoriting, or using any other mechanism to try to remember to return :-(

I suspect that the author of this piece deliberately kept this opener short and sweet with lots of dangling participants. Trying to gauge from the ratings, commentaries and feedbacks whether or not it would be worth the effort to turn this idea into a serial.

Nice lead chapter. Where are the others?