All Comments on 'Astrid in Love Ch. 01'

I read the whole chapter and very much enjoyed it.

It was short but not deep. Just a nice story so far.

The only problem I had with your story is the same problem

I have with comments I make on things I read on the internet.

I will type my reply and proofread it, then post it. OH NO

I will say to myself :) but I did proofread it. But sure enough,

I will find what I believe are grammatical errors. Being a perfectionist

does not help if you hit the submit button :)

"Ever since Ana come into her power" s/b "came"

"Much more than she love attending" love s/b loved, I think.

I use a spell check named Grammarly. It does catch most of my poor writing. :)

If you don't care about this, then fine. It's your story.

As I said, I did enjoy it and intend to read all three chapter that are on the

site so far.

Sincerely,

A New Fan

Great story but you kept not only switching between tenses but also between first person and third person.

Currently, I’m obsessed with werewolf erotica. Anytime a male werewolf claims his mate...damn! I’m so done! I can’t WAIT to see how this plays out!!!!