by theyRule
Great finale to an excellent story, I’m glad no one got hurt in the end. Many thanks theyRule.
I would like to see them reach more bases, especially 5th and 6th……. one day maybe ??
WIthout a doubt, the best story I have read in here. Great job and your style is amazing. Hope to see more from you
Thank you for the nice comments.
Note:
I reviewed and submitted a revised copy, due to some typos.
This story is kind of sick, but man do I love it and did I get aroused reading - wooooow.
Thank you, it must take a whole lot of time to write such stories.
Please continue with stories like this.
Wow. that wasn't just a story. That was a transformative experience.
I really think reading it changed me. Wow.
Wow. that wasn't just a story. That was a transformative experience.
I really think reading it changed me. Wow.
I couldn't stop reading. A great story for certain even when you hit on several of my no fly zones. I'm very glad to have read it.
Holy crap. Actually unbelievable. Without a doubt, the best piece of erotica I have ever read. I was unaware that porn could affect me the way this story did. You are an insane writer. You should be charging for this.