All Comments on 'Asymmetric Bases Ch. 10'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Great finale to an excellent story, I’m glad no one got hurt in the end. Many thanks theyRule.

I would like to see them reach more bases, especially 5th and 6th……. one day maybe ??

theyRuletheyRuleabout 2 years agoAuthor

Thank you and who knows, maybe one day :)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Please continue!! Awesome series..

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

WIthout a doubt, the best story I have read in here. Great job and your style is amazing. Hope to see more from you

theyRuletheyRulealmost 2 years agoAuthor

Thank you for the nice comments.

Note:

I reviewed and submitted a revised copy, due to some typos.

kiss2feetkiss2feetover 1 year ago

This story is kind of sick, but man do I love it and did I get aroused reading - wooooow.

Thank you, it must take a whole lot of time to write such stories.

Please continue with stories like this.

Frankdrudge2Frankdrudge2over 1 year ago

Wow. This wasn't just a story. This was a transformative experience.

Frankdrudge2Frankdrudge2over 1 year ago

Wow. That wasn't just a story, that was a transformative experience.

Frankdrudge2Frankdrudge2over 1 year ago

Wow. that wasn't just a story. That was a transformative experience.

I really think reading it changed me. Wow.

Frankdrudge2Frankdrudge2over 1 year ago

Wow. that wasn't just a story. That was a transformative experience.

I really think reading it changed me. Wow.

Frankdrudge2Frankdrudge2over 1 year ago

Amazing story. Really a transformative experience reading. Thanks you!

theyRuletheyRuleover 1 year agoAuthor

@Frankdrudge2, Lol :)

I hope you mean in a good way, thanks.

Frankdrudge2Frankdrudge2over 1 year ago

such a good way, you can't imagine. Thank you!!!!

theyRuletheyRuleover 1 year agoAuthor

@Frankdrudge2

Thank you too, very nice to read such comments.

BadHusbandMikeBadHusbandMikeover 1 year ago

I couldn't stop reading. A great story for certain even when you hit on several of my no fly zones. I'm very glad to have read it.

theyRuletheyRuleover 1 year agoAuthor

@BadHusbandMike:

Thanks a lot!

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Holy crap. Actually unbelievable. Without a doubt, the best piece of erotica I have ever read. I was unaware that porn could affect me the way this story did. You are an insane writer. You should be charging for this.

theyRuletheyRule5 months agoAuthor

Thank you :)

I'm glad you liked it.

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Newbie on story writing. I like many stories in this site, especially the ones with build ups supporting the actions. Demanding women taking what they want from both men and other women are my favorites. And women; I believe any woman can be attractive if the right beholder,...

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