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undefinedquestundefinedquestover 6 years ago
Wonderful writing

dirtyfantasies writes in a lovely descriptive way that is a pleasure to read. Highly intelligent and arousing writing. I can't wait to see the kinky adventures Miss James gets up to next!

LordsmytheLordsmytheover 6 years ago
Wonderful

Well written, just the right amount of build up . Will need to know more of these people. Your sense of drama is terrific. Just the right amount of anticipation.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
You make this writing malarkey look easy

Just read the first 4 chapters back to back and wow did it hit the spot! You definitely have a way with words, giving details of her inner monologue is what adds the realism. ALL the very best fantasies are attainable even those that are technically impossible such as those based in sci-fi or supernatural because it’s the interpersonal relationships between the characters that give it the realism.

Another 5 stars.

Tess (UK)

swollenpetalsswollenpetalsalmost 4 years ago

I just read from Ch 1 to 4... loved the story so far. Hot ! Looking to read the rest of the series now.

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