All Comments on 'At Home with Shelly Pt. 03'

Good premise.

But again rushed.

Everything moves ahead like an express train. Needs to be a local train with multiple stops until it reaches its destiation.

Needed some reluctance about cock into pussy that lasted a while and then was finally overcome when excitement destroyed logic.

Three stars.

Whine, whine, whine...If "ONLY" anon had read Part 2 he wouldn't have been "disgusted" with Part 3. TM

Would have been nice to get a little more about Mum. Maybe once the Margaritas kicked in she became a little more loose. She’s either a character in the story or leave her out. Nate should of done the sun lotion on both of them.

I feel like I’ve seen that same whiny anonymous commenting on other stories. How the fuck is “cheating” you bloody idiot? They’re not a couple. Get over your shit about girl/girl action. The author doesn’t care if you hate it or not. And also, no..not all men do think it’s hot. However the VAST majority do.

Great fun sexy story. Chapters 1 ans 2 also. Hope you continue with more including mom. 5stars

Enjoyable. Looking forward to a continuation.

Well, I've finished both of your series now and beginning to appreciate your style of writing so would be interested in seeing what else you bad to offer. But please not the same story in different clothes.

Can't wait for more chapters.....