All Comments on 'At Long Last'

and decent reading, although way too talky. Yes, build character, let us know what people are thinking, but lengthy expositive paragraphs are TMI. In future, remember single MALT--more action, less talk. So only a three, but you've got the material for a four or better.

it was good , although kinda nieve in a way, but both got some good hot black cock, wonder if she gets preg will she keep it? who's will it be maybe twins with diff daddy's

lol