All Comments on 'At the Car Wash'

Great story! Really look forward to reading more! If you fix a few of the typos (including the title), the story could easily become a 5 star entry.

Exciting, but mixed present and past tense, often in the same sentence distracted a bit.

I agree, a few typos and some hard to read sentences. I got distracted thinking about the logistics, i.e. in the car, out of the car, back in, etc. But very good story..