All Comments on 'At the Commander's Disposal Ch. 00'

I agree with Alpha. I love the characters and descriptions, etc. Will be checking for the next chapter!

That was deliciously sexy and I wanted to o take her place in that scene

Honey-

Once you get through the grammar minefield it takes off. Get an editor. This tale has potential because it snags and twists you up in the imagery and powerful sexual chemsitry between the man and the woman.

The sheer primal power of rutting sexuality speaks volumes. 5 star content to be sure.

I mean, really! It's fucking painful with the grammar and punctuation!

I tried to get into it but can't. Try putting it in Word and grammar check it!

Sorry!

This story has my little heart palpitating and fluttering. ;-)

Very sexy! 5 Stars!

keep them coming, I am loving this.

Can't wait to read more!