by Catesby
I was thoroughly enjoying this story until Tara started her "gang-bang". Up until then the story had been quite credible (even though it was only fiction) but when she began to go down the row being fucked by all, including her ass, the story got out of hand as far as I was concerned. I would have let her give a hand-job to her neighbour, and then she and her husband should have gone home for a final session.
Sorry but women like that have very short life expectancies. I have no interest at all in women who hate themselves enough to have bareback sex with strangers. STDs and AIDS are not turnons. In this day and time, fantasies involve multiple sex yes, but with protection from infections and such. Anything else is suicide!
Writers express who they are in their writing. From this terrible little "story," it's clear Catie lacks the basic traits of manhood. Too bad. Beyond that, the writing is unorganized, poorly punctuated, and clearly the result of a mind with little imagination.
cock. I know you had the husband like he was so Tara could do her thing or their thingies. Pay no attention to the wimpy woosey little politicaly correct ultra liberal assholes that comment.
Your stories are great. Besides "At the Grindhouse," I particularly appreciated "Shenanigans."
Hope you keep writing.
Outstanding story.. It had me "hard" from the first paragraph.. Please submit more stories, of the lovely and slutty, Tara...
Is there such a thing as a family tree in the UK or is it a case of why bother because no one wants a cuckster as their daddy as he is just a wimp raising others bastard babies.<P>
You weak excuses for a man must really piss off the real men in the UK with your pathetic wife pimping and cock watching.<P>
What the semi-normal person can't figure out is why you guys are so excited about pimping, wimping, watching cocks and raising someone else's kids? Are you just bored or numbly jaded or both? Puzzling.
I read all theatre stories and have a huge collection.
This is a very special addition and you have handled the genre with exemplary skill.
A very hot slut story that benefitted greatly from the mention on the young girl "memories" at the beginning.
Congratulations. I'll be watching your catalogue closely from now on.
This story got me going. I was a bit disappointed with the messy climax but none the less enjoyed the build up. This author is really good at the dialogue between husband and wife - I have liked this aspect of some of his other stories.
Keep it up!
I liked the whole story but I loved the story in the story. Great writing of an old story. You read so many adult theater stories, you end up numb. This story sensitized my dick and I back to a hard-on. Great writing!!!!!
P.S. Call it The Blob because of all the cum she had all over her.
If I were a man I would have come already, but as a woman I am able to contain myself better, although I did have to put my knickers in the wash afterwards. In fact I was so wet I thought that I had peed myself. - I probably had!
I wonder why you stopped posting when it's clear that you are highly talented! I enjoy all of your work and hope that I might one day see you once again grace the pages of Literotica! Hope you are well!
Newtype
A fantasy I've always had and often wished I could get my wife to do this -- very erotic and well written - a cock hard story.
Does nobody have an ordinary looking wife, every story you start to read the bloke has the worlds best looking wife, life's not like that. There are lots of plain looking women that are sexy as hell and fuck like rabbits, I know I've fucked a lot. I just find it a turn off
I think all lady's should let themselves go every now and again. A good wife is a slut wife. To all the cock sucking Annomies, in fantasy land their is no Aids or Std's, everyone just has fun.
I loved the story but I wish her husband had gone down on her after she fucked those men i sure would have
Love the fantasy. Wife and I saw Deep Throat way back then. Not much action because the place was full.
However Behind the Green Door there was a lot of action happening in the theater