All Comments on 'At the Laundry Mat'

The opening few sextences were enough

This story is hot!! One of the best first stories i've ever read here - congratulations!

Ignore what the previous post said. This is wonderful, and I can only hope you write about their next adventure very very soon. :D

Oh, yes, thank you so much. I thought I was the only one fantasizing of being spanked and taken on the clothes folding tables. Very descriptive. I could see and feel everything. My twat is drippy and it's all because of you.

Great hot original story. Know my gf will love it. Hope you write more stories.

Made me cum a few times! Probably gonnna happen again a few more!

Great story! Wicked hot! One of the best I've ever read, and I've read thousands. It caters to my desires and fantasies. It's a keeper!

wow! that was a great story. really hit close to home too. there's many a day i've come home with not enough tips from idiotic people and i've wanted to take my frustrations out on a hot girl like you. keep it up!

wow,wonderfully done

"Laundry mat"? I kept thinking about that and the other typos that sort of bumped me out of the mood. Lost my way in some of those looooong paragraphs as well.

I was looking for a short story that would deliver a punch without too much exposition and yours definitely did it. The sex was incredible, forceful but not too over the top, just the way I like it. I liked both of the characters and thought that the chemistry you created between them was amazing. Kept me wet the whole time. Thanks for sharing!

Totally awesome

That was a great submission… You are such a dirty little girl and the way you described it with each little detail was so fantastic… Keep up the good work as I look forward to read another submission from you…

Really liked it. Typos, especially the missing words and the word laundromat, were too distracting for the good action.

Omg amazing....I needed that

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