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by PervertedOne4You

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
More details

More sexual details would improve the tale

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

Good start. Would prefer to read about Lisa sucking some of the clients cocks instead of her husband doing the same. Do turn her out and upside down but leave Chad in cuck voyeur mode.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Good Start

You need to put a story to this outline. If it was filled with the details the story could be a five star read.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Disappointed no follow up - please continue.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Great story!

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I am a mature male who has had a wonderful life full of sexual adventures - which help stir my creative juices to write these stories. Hope you enjoy.