All Comments on 'Athlete Partner'

Sorry, I could give this very high marks. The plot is enjoyable and the characters are ok, but you stumble through the English language. Besides the occasional typos or misspellings, the repetitiveness nearly killed me: “She panted, breathing heavily as she tried to catch her breath.” You repeat yourself, saying the same thing over and over again. Get the point? Ok, erotica need not have perfect English, but stumbling mistakes break the rhythm you’re trying to build that lead to a breathtaking climax. And THAT is the point of erotica.

Oh, my apologies for stumbling through "the english language" and not meeting your superior and impeccable fap standards of erotic literature.

10 miles... in 52 minutes???

If you run a steady pace of 5 minutes a mile...yes...52 minutes is a good time for 10 miles.