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hornacekover 14 years agoThis was barely a story.
Had some potential, but you blew it. Next time take more than 10 minutes to write a story.
Anonymousover 14 years agoShow, Don't Tell
That's the way to make your story more interesting. But it takes more work and will make it a lot longer. That's what writing fiction is all about.
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