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AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Good story, partially ruined by N00b mistakes. Don't think spellcheck gets things right. The wrong word spelled correctly passes the checker, it doesn't help the story. 4* It would have been 5* if it weren't for very aggravating mistakes.

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