All Comments on 'Atonement: A Love Story'

Creative story with realistic basis. Many fraternities have "pig parties" where less attractive coeds are humiliated. Getting these guys back is wonderful

As I said, an excellent story, please more of these 8-)

Lovely as usual, but unfortunately shorter, than the previous stories.

Please conitinue!

Such a beautiful story of love and submission to the Sacred Feminine!!!!!

Perfect! The combination of sensuous, submissive, and sadistic was great! Not to mention arousing. :-)

What Ben really did was turn her into to the police and had her sent to jail for years and years. You're ending was completely delusional. She'd be lucky to make it to jail. Most guys would have beaten her to death at the first opportunity.

It seems some guy reads my stories and then gets all worked up because they are about women dominating and abusing men. Must have some deep seated insecurity about his masculinity and also doesn't seem to know the definition of the word "fantasy".

I am not the anonymous of 08.07, 18 .

He does have a point .

Fantasy works better with a grounding in reality .