All Comments on 'Auckland Wife's First BBC'

You also have a porn addiction.

You can do all the but what if all you want. You can shove all of the "research" in my face, again, all you want.

The only men that are obsessed with this fantasy are porn addicts or closet cases. My guess is you secretly watch gay porn with guys jerking off. Your other porn collection is entirely cuckold porn (almost exclusively interracial or your wife with young men).

My last guess is that you cannot even have an orgasm with your wife without imagining her with another man. This would even be the case if you have not actually engaged in a cuckold experience which I am almost 100% certain you have not

Sounds like the start of a beautiful relationship. More pictures and she will get all the black cock she can handle.

Don't like the subject, but you write well. Keep it up.

This is why women are the inferior to men. Give them a good orgasm and they are owned.

Congratulations for your first story. My question for you though is if you read Literotica and L/W why would you put I/R in this section? You might do better there.

Is there a chapter 2 in the offing?

Put it over in IR with the rest of the racists.

"His black cum"? She must go as soon as possible to see a doctor...1*

Good story, especially for a first effort. I do hope there's more to follow, this holds so much promise.

Great start. Write on!

So weird seeing my own city in a story on here. Love the story. Going to have to read the next two straight away

Good start, love another white wife being unable to stay away from black cock

Great start, loved it! Can`t wait to read the following chapters

First thing noticed: Black cum?

Second: Possessive ‘strophes’ heavily omitted.

“ … telling him Mikes name.“ should be -Mike’s.-

Then: Several times there is considerable ambiguity about who is texting whom. A number of ways to cover that without saying ‘Angela wrote’ such as italics for her message and bold for his. Or, since Richard is calling Sweetie names like ‘Slut’ she can address him as ‘Stud’ to help We-The-Readers figure out the text-sender.

Tangent: Why introduce the still-shot (then worse, the video) at this juncture. In Sweetie’s shoes, I would show up at 21:30 with a tube-curare-dipped hat-pin.

3* … so far

Jamal bags a White Kiwi whore, and the cuck boys wet their panties with glee. Kennygirl and Clarkgarbled amongst them.

Bonus point for writing about a black dick having its way with a white chick! Agree with Lickideesplit's comments.

Richard is too assertive imho, taking it too fast. I know this is fantasy, but the tempo at which Angela has to accept the new game rules will rather chase her away than pull her closer. It also seems as if you have limited immagination by immediately going all out...

Wrong category, you may have received more possitive feedback in IR. Will zee how the story develops. 3* for now.

not bad for a first attempt,i was almost tempted to give it a ten out of ten.

unfortunately by PT2.it was sounding more like your run of the mill so so.

Interracial story.with the usual suspects,woman fucks black guy becomes his

and never gose back. these are ten a penny on the internet.maybe try thinking outside the box

maybe this was one time thing.go into more detail about how she got her here?