All Comments on 'Auction'

... to two compatible souls having erotic fun & joy. Like the surprising start into the scenario, then how after the auction both slowly explore their relationship. Hope there is more to come.

Very well righten a good start to a new master and an eager sub hope to see how there relationship develops. Tim seems to be a natural and is learning quickly.

I think it would be hot if Annie would come along. After all, a master has the right to have his slave around for whatever needs he has. If there is a meeting just between masters she can make herself useful around the club. Or she can be used as a training dummy. Or made to watch a play scene.

Annie is the heroine of the story, the emerging perfect slave. Let's hear more about her.

I would love it if you would continue this story. It is perfect!!

definitely needs more chapters, please

Gotta cut back on the “eh” thing

I really liked it. Not the most beautifully written prose, but an intimate and caring story about BDSM which was also arousing so you get 5 stars! We need another chapter :)

Great story, liked it a lot.

Looking forward to more

Good buildup, needs more parts.

Nice work nevertheless.

-Acinonyx

Great job. A positive, loving, respectful portrait of D/s - and quite hot. You obviously like the characters, and that carries over to the reader. Please consider writing more in this series.

Very good story! Loved every bit of it. Need more chapters. Lots more chapters, you can take this anywhere. Good job!

These kinds of stories, with loving likable characters, are rare.

Thank you for writing it and hopefully you'll someday find time to add another chapter

I think we have a hit here. This is a story that needs more chapters. Don't keep us waiting to long.

Great story, wonderful to read.

Likeable characters, but a pretty dangerous dynamic. This isn’t D/s as stated above; it’s Master/slave which is typically more aggressive. The danger lies in Tim being a neophyte to the scene and unwilling to do any research into it. He clearly knows nothing about after care or how to gauge how much is enough. Most slaves don’t really want to need medical care, but that’s where this is heading if he improvises by hitting her with kitchen utensils and biting her neck deep enough to draw blood.

This story deserves more parts, please keep them coming

I look forward to the next chapter

Great story so far! I just wish you would continue it.

Some of the comments given were about it being quite dangerous with him not knowing much, if any, about the whole d/s &/or master/slave lifestyle. Which, while I agree it MAY be dangerous, I have to wonder if this isn’t, maybe, a little closer to how things often work in the real world.

I hope you continue this

GRAT STORY FLOWS WELL

With such high marks you should continue this story. I enjoy it very much. There is so much left to tell in it.

Don’t stop. Only the beginning.

Please continue writing. Can’t wait for more. I feel like it would be good to show some sort of love between the characters.

More please

Just read this for the second time and will comment .

This is one of the best stories on this site, it has it all, sex, humour and humanity. Such a well written story.

Author, if you ever find the time please finish this wonderful tale.

Scores 5/5

It's good so far but Annie should guide him into being a good master.

Brilliant. The best I have read on this site, well done, looking forward next fantastic episode.

Great story I hope you write more I like it a lot let him buy a second slave and make them play together

Buying a slave at an auction is my biggest fantasy

This is really good. You get inside the head of both characters very well and the dynamics are great. This one deserves a sequel or three.

This is a great story, I know it's been almost a year since you wrote it but it really does deserve a sequel.

Definately deserves a sequel or two. Great story. Shows both sides and is not a ruthless one sided relationship.

Its been quite a long time since a story like this has me begging for what comes next. Its so wholesome yet erotic that I couldn't stop reading. I HAVE to know what their relationship grows into. Besides fixable grammatical errors this story is amazing, and I'm dying to see more of your creativity!

This is great man, would be amazing if you could write PT 2.

This story is fantastic! I thoroughly enjoyed it, especially how both are enjoying the relationship and growing into their roles. Please write a sequel!

Wow! You have created a fantastic dynamic! Please continue.

Definitely needs part 2. Keep on writing

Well done. Please let us know what happens at the club.

Love this story, but with all the fucking, can her getting knocked up be far behind? *fingers crossed*

Can’t wait for part 2.

Really good. I enjoyed it immensely. I love the dynamics and the writing was well done. It kept me wet the whole time and it seemed so realistic. Thanks.

Please upload the second part, nice story

brilliant story, please write part 2 eagerly waiting

I loved this. Really want to see the next part. It’s languished for far too long. Please continue.

What happens at the club? You’ve dropped hints about the Lady Elizabeth. Does she try to turn him into a sub? What else does Annie come up with to keep him interested? Does he take her shopping for clothes or toys? Do they explore a bit of bondage/Shibari?

Really liking your style of writing. You have a good editor! Nothing gets in the way of the story which I appreciate a great deal.

Great story!

I loved this story. Please write another part.

Great story and definitely warrants a second part.

Still waiting for part 2.

One more vote for the next part!

Dontjudgeme managed to write a story that is sweetly romantic, kinky hot and nasty, and people helping each other wholesome ALL AT THE SAME TIME! Sorry, but I have to judge. This story is fantastic and I hope it gets a part 2 to bring it to the conclusion a story this great deserves.

This is THE BEST story. I have to go change underwear.

Wow! GREAT story. Next chapter please!!!

I can't wait for part 2. I love that she is curvy, older, and soo into her role. Well done

I have a feeling i can sense what may be coming next regarding jeff ???

I just realised there is no part 2 and it has been over 3 years.........NOT FAIR !

Amazing, would love to read part 2!

You write well. Suspenseful ending. Please put writing more of this story on your TO DO LIST !

I am really enjoying this story! Keep up the good work!

That was brilliant! Please write part 2

Really hope you continue this

Well written and well conceived.

Very well done. I'll check out some of your other stuff.