All Comments on 'Auctioned Ch. 01'

Yes!!! I would just love to be auctioned like that to the stern looking and strict Lady next door

YOU'RE SHIT, Your story was a bit dry. I didn't feel the flavour of emotion that appears in better stories. Maybe it's because you're an amatuer writer, but I really think you should use more advanced grammer.

And remember vote for Obama this election.

A Nice person.

Interesting to comment that a person is "SHIT" (at least you guessed which "you're/your" to use) and criticize their "grammer" (sic) when, obviously, spelling is not YOUR strong suit.

Good concept for a story, and I suspect it was written in the author's normal speaking style.

Website please...lol

And the sequel would be very much appreciated...!