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AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Wait, what secret was "revealed". We already knew she was getting herself off.

SniperkingSniperking4 months ago

yh, agree with anon, nothing was revealed. good chap tho

asianToyasianToy3 months ago

Fabulous story.

AnonymousAnonymous17 days ago

Great story and well written. Ok, Mr. Library bookreader seemes to be a little slow or thick in his head - instead of trying to fix that spell which allowes him to understand any language and talk to his new faerie, he runs away. How about grocerie shopping and kooking together? No, his sin deamon can handle to explain daily life. What an partner. No explanation of the bathroom, toilet, oven / kitchen or anything. Instead of joying shopping with his two beautyful women he like hiding away. While the story is nice, some behaviour of that "story hero" is just painfully poor. And yes, while it is an learning process the life of an son&wife may considered to be more than 500$ worth. I'm interestet what comes next, so thank you for publishing

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Flexing creative muscles that have atrophied thanks to capitalism. Augur Series: Book 1 is complete and published as of 1/24/24! Book 2 will take a while, but we have not seen the last of Jack or the ladies (Update 2/22/24: ~40k words of book two written) Your feedback is al...

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