All Comments on 'Aunt and Uncle Give Niece an Enema'

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bobbycull55bobbycull55over 1 year ago

Too much talking; not enough insertions

moimeme68moimeme68over 1 year ago

I really liked it!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Wished Ben could have inserted himself into Tina to make her feel better.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Good idea, but fairly stilted dialogue.

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I am a very amateur writer. For a couple of years I wrote lots of stories just for fun, not showing them to anyone else. While I do make every effort the stories will contain many errors as I am dyslexic.The stories will never win any awards but I hope that many of them will b...