by JohnnyCorona
"One day during the afternoon, aunt Ellie dedicated the whole day to clean the house."
You need a editor.
A woman with small kids. Cleaning the whole house. Sweating all over. Dirty and smelly. No woman will allow other people to come near her in that condition, not even her own husband. Please think about us the experienced adults when writing down your imagination. Better luck next time.
"We never talk about what happened but let's just say I'm looking forward for the next cleaning day."
So, "We never talk about what happened that day..." Clearly a decent amount of time has passed, for it to be "never". Yet he's looking forward to the next cleaning day. Sounds like the house gets cleaned maybe twice a year... at best.
There was much that was bad about this, which others have already commented on. Please, Lit, introduce a ZERO rating for garbage like this!
Your wonderful story made my dick wither quicker than hearing President Cheesepuff commenting on his innocence.
I can't wait for the part with you on your knees worshiping her husband's 12" coke can cock while she pegs your ass as the kids play outside. And then you wake up next to Bill Cosby and white stains around your anus.