All Comments on 'Aunt Emily Finds Out'

A bit on the short side and a cliffhanger is never welcome. Please keep going, I enjoyed reading this sexy tale

I love the premise, but I had to stop reading. The sons name kept changing. Jack, John, Jason. Which one is it?

Jack, John or Jason... Just who is this guy?

Very nice, but you need to keep going to an actual conclusion, and not just a vignette,

Thank you for the feedback! This series is made up of little snapshots of short moments in time. Reading these little stories the reader gets glimpses into Jack's world while it is being unveiled piece by piece like a puzzle. The reader is free to give in to imagination about what happens during the time that is not explicitly described in the stories.

By the way, the next glimpse into Jack's world was just submitted for review.

Fun tale that makes many of us envy Thierr familial scenario . . . We all had aunts . . . cousins too.

Good, but too brief. Your make character’s

name changed three times.

I apologize for the unintended name changes during the story. I have resubmitted it and hope that the corrected version will be up soon. The second part of the series should be fine with regards to Jack's name.

Reads like a entry chapter. Could have been longer. That it ended was quite sudden

Proofread before you publish. Even as it's your first story. Jack, John or Jason which one is it?

Jack, John, Jason, how many other names does the son have, its confusing when in one paragraph all 3 names were used for the person .

John, Jack, Jason. Try to keep names the same!

Agree. Proofread a little bit more and stick with only one name not two. Was probably done using autocorrect and didn’t proofread it enough. Otherwise not bad. Needs more chapters though

Is it that tough to read your own story once before posting it? You changed the guy’s name 3 times and still haven’t corrected it.

stlbob4904, the corrected version of the text was submitted for review on the 30th of March. At the moment its status is still "pending".

I gave up when Jack became John, returned briefly as Jack before morphing into Jason.

John, Jack, Jason...does he have multiple personality disorder?

Just a 3 !! Was his name John, Jason or Jack what a fucked up story !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!